rap

as we initially come up with the title sun down we decided to base the rap around this title.
The first verse goes like this:

I only got until sundown
If i dont get this money im going to get gun down
How am i going to raise all that money in this small town
runing away is not an options thats too late now.

I believe this first verse will be extremely effective in terms of opening up the movie.This will indicate to the audience the seriousness of the position the protagonist is caught up in.

David